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Something inside me is hurting...
...I think it's where my heart should be

But...

Of course it's not there anymore....
Because you took it away from me

It hurts so much now
The growing pains will not stop...
It hurts so much that my head is spinning like a top...

Only  you can stop the pain...

I demand you to...

Stop the pain
Make it stop
Stop the pain

Or I will drop....
Dead on the floor...
With no heart at all
Dead on the floor...
You'll be the reason of my fall...
....
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lightningmaster2001 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I feel like this right now
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MaliciousNature Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
As painful as it is, it is essential to survival.
It turns yourself upside down at times and makes you lurch for mercy finding no solace or gratitude in the arms you once knew were yours and yours alone.

I am glad that my poem written so long ago can relate still to the broken hearts of many. To know that you are not alone in the pain you feel lessens the void a little though minuscule to some it may mean more than meets the eyes and ears of many.
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lightningmaster2001 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I am crying my heart out right now in my mind and your poem really touched me
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MaliciousNature Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I understand. Heartbreak is not easy. :hug:
Thank you, it is a compliment knowing that my poem relates, although painful, do not worry so much for there are no rainbows without rain.
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lightningmaster2001 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
True thanks for the advice you really helped me
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MaliciousNature Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime! I'm glad I helped you, even if it was a little! :meow:
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lightningmaster2001 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You actually helped me a lot I feel so much better now!
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MaliciousNature Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! I'm glad! :hug: =P
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aceofspades28 Featured By Owner May 5, 2010   Writer
Great poem! Hopefully that void where your heart was will be filled once more very soon or already has.
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MaliciousNature Featured By Owner May 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
and
no I'm single but eh..
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